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doc/cephadm: improving "Monitoring the Upgrade"
authorZac Dover <zac.dover@gmail.com>
Tue, 29 Jun 2021 12:42:29 +0000 (22:42 +1000)
committerZac Dover <zac.dover@gmail.com>
Tue, 29 Jun 2021 12:42:29 +0000 (22:42 +1000)
commit2dcdef0d43fb269447b5a00c8c29dc508919768d
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doc/cephadm: improving "Monitoring the Upgrade"

This PR improves the section "Monitoring the Upgrade"
in the "Upgrading Ceph" chapter of the cephadm documentation.

This PR introduces a couple of section breaks with signposting
information in their titles, and rewrites some sentences in order
to reduce the cognitive load of the reader.

Signed-off-by: Zac Dover <zac.dover@gmail.com>
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