From: Zac Dover Date: Fri, 1 Nov 2024 13:43:07 +0000 (+1000) Subject: doc: s/Whereas,/Although/ X-Git-Url: http://git.apps.os.sepia.ceph.com/?a=commitdiff_plain;h=119fd0853a5306cce39c22faf54894c74ab529ae;p=ceph.git doc: s/Whereas,/Although/ Change the subordinating conjunction "Whereas" followed by a comma to the less grammatically-incorrect "Although". I've been meaning to do this since 22 Mar 2023. Signed-off-by: Zac Dover (cherry picked from commit ea1a470fb4809d312f854e72fc5f8081cbcb2c49) --- diff --git a/doc/architecture.rst b/doc/architecture.rst index d8e1b03ac3ea1..670de0d6a32d0 100644 --- a/doc/architecture.rst +++ b/doc/architecture.rst @@ -1213,7 +1213,7 @@ exemplary implementations. Summary ------- -Ceph Storage Clusters are dynamic--like a living organism. Whereas, many storage +Ceph Storage Clusters are dynamic--like a living organism. Although many storage appliances do not fully utilize the CPU and RAM of a typical commodity server, Ceph does. From heartbeats, to peering, to rebalancing the cluster or recovering from faults, Ceph offloads work from clients (and from a centralized diff --git a/doc/rados/api/python.rst b/doc/rados/api/python.rst index 8dbe4efcde33f..5a1846fd5e5c8 100644 --- a/doc/rados/api/python.rst +++ b/doc/rados/api/python.rst @@ -354,7 +354,7 @@ invoking methods of the `Ioctx` and other classes. .. -------------- .. The Ceph Storage Cluster allows you to make a snapshot of a pool's state. -.. Whereas, basic pool operations only require a connection to the cluster, +.. Although basic pool operations require only a connection to the cluster, .. snapshots require an I/O context. .. Ioctx.create_snap(self, snap_name) diff --git a/doc/rados/configuration/mon-config-ref.rst b/doc/rados/configuration/mon-config-ref.rst index 252c2f4c2646c..6e7d508ba4f0f 100644 --- a/doc/rados/configuration/mon-config-ref.rst +++ b/doc/rados/configuration/mon-config-ref.rst @@ -113,7 +113,7 @@ Consistency When you add monitor settings to your Ceph configuration file, you need to be aware of some of the architectural aspects of Ceph Monitors. **Ceph imposes strict consistency requirements** for a Ceph monitor when discovering another -Ceph Monitor within the cluster. Whereas, Ceph Clients and other Ceph daemons +Ceph Monitor within the cluster. Although Ceph Clients and other Ceph daemons use the Ceph configuration file to discover monitors, monitors discover each other using the monitor map (monmap), not the Ceph configuration file. diff --git a/doc/start/documenting-ceph.rst b/doc/start/documenting-ceph.rst index 84f87014da18a..a98682b102eef 100644 --- a/doc/start/documenting-ceph.rst +++ b/doc/start/documenting-ceph.rst @@ -862,7 +862,7 @@ possible, we prefer to maintain this convention with text, lists, literal text lines should begin at the same character position as the text of the indented text (less numbers, bullets, etc.). - Indented text may include literal text examples. Whereas, text indentation + Indented text may include literal text examples. Although text indentation should be done with spaces, literal text examples should be indented with tabs. This convention enables you to add an additional indented paragraph following a literal example by leaving a blank line and beginning the