From: Zac Dover Date: Sat, 5 Nov 2022 16:59:23 +0000 (+1000) Subject: doc/glossary: improve wording X-Git-Tag: v18.1.0~921^2 X-Git-Url: http://git.apps.os.sepia.ceph.com/?a=commitdiff_plain;h=add6cc2a91e0b05d25d7d3550c22639f2bef717e;p=ceph.git doc/glossary: improve wording Remove "e.g." and "etc." and improve the wording of a definition. Signed-off-by: Zac Dover --- diff --git a/doc/glossary.rst b/doc/glossary.rst index 8d8fbd66ae5ce..9b644c67d33c4 100644 --- a/doc/glossary.rst +++ b/doc/glossary.rst @@ -61,12 +61,12 @@ reflect either technical terms or legacy ways of referring to Ceph systems. more details. Ceph Interim Release - Versions of Ceph that have not yet been put through quality - assurance testing, but may contain new features. + A version of Ceph that has not yet been put through quality + assurance testing. May contain new features. Ceph Kernel Modules - The collection of kernel modules which can be used to interact - with the Ceph System (e.g., ``ceph.ko``, ``rbd.ko``). + The collection of kernel modules that can be used to interact + with the Ceph System (for example: ``ceph.ko``, ``rbd.ko``). Ceph Manager Ceph Manager Dashboard @@ -132,7 +132,7 @@ reflect either technical terms or legacy ways of referring to Ceph systems. Cloud Platforms Cloud Stacks Third party cloud provisioning platforms such as OpenStack, - CloudStack, OpenNebula, Proxmox VE, etc. + CloudStack, OpenNebula, and Proxmox VE. Cluster Map The set of maps comprising the monitor map, OSD map, PG map, @@ -179,7 +179,7 @@ reflect either technical terms or legacy ways of referring to Ceph systems. Node Object Storage Device OSD - A physical or logical storage unit (*e.g.*, LUN). + A physical or logical storage unit (for example: LUN). Sometimes, Ceph users use the term "OSD" to refer to :term:`Ceph OSD Daemon`, though the proper term is "Ceph OSD".