From: John Wilkins Date: Thu, 27 Jul 2017 16:59:00 +0000 (-0700) Subject: doc/start: Removed contractions for ESL speakers. X-Git-Tag: v12.1.2~65^2~1 X-Git-Url: http://git-server-git.apps.pok.os.sepia.ceph.com/?a=commitdiff_plain;h=c978a76b4d842395b505e9b7cc1226c07b74777e;p=ceph.git doc/start: Removed contractions for ESL speakers. Signed-off-by: John Wilkins --- diff --git a/doc/start/documenting-ceph.rst b/doc/start/documenting-ceph.rst index 856f4fb662a3..b4f159c34d64 100644 --- a/doc/start/documenting-ceph.rst +++ b/doc/start/documenting-ceph.rst @@ -284,7 +284,7 @@ the following packages are required: -Install each dependency that isn't installed on your host. For Debian/Ubuntu +Install each dependency that is not installed on your host. For Debian/Ubuntu distributions, execute the following:: sudo apt-get install gcc python-dev python-pip python-virtualenv libxml2-dev libxslt-dev doxygen graphviz ant ditaa @@ -322,7 +322,7 @@ packages. Then, download them from a mirror and install them. For example:: wget http://rpmfind.net/linux/centos/7/os/x86_64/Packages/python-sphinx-1.1.3-11.el7.noarch.rpm sudo yum install python-sphinx-1.1.3-11.el7.noarch.rpm -Ceph documentation makes extensive use of `ditaa`_, which isn't presently built +Ceph documentation makes extensive use of `ditaa`_, which is not presently built for CentOS/RHEL7. You must install ``ditaa`` if you are making changes to ``ditaa`` diagrams so that you can verify that they render properly before you commit new or modified ``ditaa`` diagrams. You may retrieve compatible required diff --git a/doc/start/hardware-recommendations.rst b/doc/start/hardware-recommendations.rst index dda222843874..eac5dc8c9f0b 100644 --- a/doc/start/hardware-recommendations.rst +++ b/doc/start/hardware-recommendations.rst @@ -111,7 +111,7 @@ SSDs often cost more than 10x as much per gigabyte when compared to a hard disk drive, but SSDs often exhibit access times that are at least 100x faster than a hard disk drive. -SSDs do not have moving mechanical parts so they aren't necessarily subject to +SSDs do not have moving mechanical parts so they are not necessarily subject to the same types of limitations as hard disk drives. SSDs do have significant limitations though. When evaluating SSDs, it is important to consider the performance of sequential reads and writes. An SSD that has 400MB/s sequential diff --git a/doc/start/index.rst b/doc/start/index.rst index 3e99bb804f70..6c799c00d468 100644 --- a/doc/start/index.rst +++ b/doc/start/index.rst @@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ avail yourself of help by getting involved in the Ceph community.

Step 2: Storage Cluster

-Once you've completed your preflight checklist, you should be able to begin +Once you have completed your preflight checklist, you should be able to begin deploying a Ceph Storage Cluster. .. toctree::