From: Zac Dover Date: Wed, 19 May 2021 14:07:45 +0000 (+1000) Subject: doc/security: enriching second point X-Git-Tag: v17.1.0~1890^2 X-Git-Url: http://git.apps.os.sepia.ceph.com/?a=commitdiff_plain;h=e9ee21f0f8c2826bdf7a5d26e2e5588c41968c63;p=ceph.git doc/security: enriching second point This PR breaks a long sentence into two shorter sentences and improves the language. Signed-off-by: Zac Dover --- diff --git a/doc/security/process.rst b/doc/security/process.rst index 83e8679530cdd..341a53210d0e5 100644 --- a/doc/security/process.rst +++ b/doc/security/process.rst @@ -2,9 +2,9 @@ Vulnerability Management Process ================================ #. The report will be acknowledged within three business days. -#. The team will investigate and update the email thread with relevant - information and may ask for additional information or guidance - surrounding the reported issue. +#. The team will investigate the reported issue and will update the email + thread with relevant information. The team may ask for additional + information regarding the reported issue. #. If the team does not confirm the report, no further action will be taken and the issue will be closed. #. If the team confirms the report, a unique CVE identifier will be