From: Zac Dover Date: Tue, 29 Jun 2021 01:29:33 +0000 (+1000) Subject: doc/cephadm: improve "Upgrading Ceph" (main) X-Git-Tag: v17.1.0~1532^2 X-Git-Url: http://git-server-git.apps.pok.os.sepia.ceph.com/?a=commitdiff_plain;h=refs%2Fpull%2F42079%2Fhead;p=ceph.git doc/cephadm: improve "Upgrading Ceph" (main) This PR makes a couple of minor improvements to the text under the top-level section "Upgrading Ceph" in the "Upgrading Ceph" chapter of the cephadm documentation. This one, mercifully, contains only a couple of changes. Signed-off-by: Zac Dover --- diff --git a/doc/cephadm/upgrade.rst b/doc/cephadm/upgrade.rst index 8b6023e82ad5..c1bbff7e413e 100644 --- a/doc/cephadm/upgrade.rst +++ b/doc/cephadm/upgrade.rst @@ -2,9 +2,9 @@ Upgrading Ceph ============== -Cephadm is capable of safely upgrading Ceph from one bugfix release to -another. For example, you can upgrade from v15.2.0 (the first Octopus -release) to the next point release v15.2.1. +Cephadm can safely upgrade Ceph from one bugfix release to the next. For +example, you can upgrade from v15.2.0 (the first Octopus release) to the next +point release, v15.2.1. The automated upgrade process follows Ceph best practices. For example: @@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ The automated upgrade process follows Ceph best practices. For example: will remain available. Keep in mind that the Ceph cluster health status is likely to switch to -`HEALTH_WARNING` during the upgrade. +``HEALTH_WARNING`` during the upgrade. Starting the upgrade