From c30ede0b3a5f63933774508afff14937079d8cdf Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Florian Haas Date: Tue, 26 Jun 2018 14:27:13 +0200 Subject: [PATCH] doc: Fix minor documentation issues in Mimic release notes Small grammar glitches, typos, minor style issues. Signed-off-by: Florian Haas --- doc/releases/mimic.rst | 19 ++++++++++--------- 1 file changed, 10 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-) diff --git a/doc/releases/mimic.rst b/doc/releases/mimic.rst index bcffe5d3319..0d6b686e845 100644 --- a/doc/releases/mimic.rst +++ b/doc/releases/mimic.rst @@ -27,10 +27,10 @@ Major Changes from Luminous * RGW can now replicate a zone (or a subset of buckets) to an external cloud storage service like S3. - * RGW now supports the S3 multi-factor authentication api on + * RGW now supports the S3 multi-factor authentication API on versioned buckets. - * The Beast frontend is no long expermiental and is considered stable - and ready for use. + * The Beast frontend is no longer experimental, and is considered + stable and ready for use. - *CephFS*: @@ -100,7 +100,7 @@ Instructions possibly have a negative impact on your Ceph clients' performance. #. Make sure your cluster is stable and healthy (no down or - recoverying OSDs). (Optional, but recommended.) + recovering OSDs). (Optional, but recommended.) #. Set the ``noout`` flag for the duration of the upgrade. (Optional, but recommended.):: @@ -112,9 +112,9 @@ Instructions # systemctl restart ceph-mon.target - Verify the monitor upgrade is complete once all monitors are up by - looking for the ``mimic`` feature string in the mon map. For - example:: + Once all monitors are up, verify that the monitor upgrade is + complete by looking for the ``mimic`` feature string in the mon + map. For example:: # ceph mon feature ls @@ -129,7 +129,8 @@ Instructions # systemctl restart ceph-mgr.target - Verify the ceph-mgr daemons are running by checking ``ceph -s``:: + Verify the ``ceph-mgr`` daemons are running by checking ``ceph + -s``:: # ceph -s @@ -192,7 +193,7 @@ Instructions # systemctl restart radosgw.target -#. Complete the upgrade by disallowing pre-mimic OSDs and enabling +#. Complete the upgrade by disallowing pre-Mimic OSDs and enabling all new Mimic-only functionality:: # ceph osd require-osd-release mimic -- 2.39.5