From 4eeb423b28d996d0b6352d509f7a4f834f48e739 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Zac Dover Date: Tue, 30 Jan 2024 19:51:53 +1000 Subject: [PATCH] doc/architecture: improve some paragraphs Improve paragraphs under the heading "The Ceph Storage Cluster". Remove a sentence that was pleonastic in its context in the paragraph. Signed-off-by: Zac Dover (cherry picked from commit 2f0542d66901295cf875893de0ac15304578d917) --- doc/architecture.rst | 14 +++++++------- 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-) diff --git a/doc/architecture.rst b/doc/architecture.rst index 6b945dae7d13..05fd8a1142d9 100644 --- a/doc/architecture.rst +++ b/doc/architecture.rst @@ -38,9 +38,8 @@ A Ceph Storage Cluster consists of multiple types of daemons: .. _arch_monitor: Ceph Monitors maintain the master copy of the cluster map, which they provide -to Ceph clients. Provisioning multiple monitors within the Ceph cluster ensures -availability in the event that one of the monitor daemons or its host fails. -The Ceph monitor provides copies of the cluster map to storage cluster clients. +to Ceph clients. The existence of multiple monitors in the Ceph cluster ensures +availability if one of the monitor daemons or its host fails. A Ceph OSD Daemon checks its own state and the state of other OSDs and reports back to monitors. @@ -52,10 +51,11 @@ A Ceph Metadata Server (MDS) manages file metadata when CephFS is used to provide file services. Storage cluster clients and :term:`Ceph OSD Daemon`\s use the CRUSH algorithm -to compute information about data location. This means that clients and OSDs -are not bottlenecked by a central lookup table. Ceph's high-level features -include a native interface to the Ceph Storage Cluster via ``librados``, and a -number of service interfaces built on top of ``librados``. +to compute information about the location of data. Use of the CRUSH algoritm +means that clients and OSDs are not bottlenecked by a central lookup table. +Ceph's high-level features include a native interface to the Ceph Storage +Cluster via ``librados``, and a number of service interfaces built on top of +``librados``. Storing Data ------------ -- 2.47.3