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authorZac Dover <zac.dover@gmail.com>
Wed, 14 Sep 2022 05:19:44 +0000 (15:19 +1000)
committerZac Dover <zac.dover@gmail.com>
Wed, 5 Oct 2022 05:50:26 +0000 (15:50 +1000)
commit6673687859282c9d88e1c6f9e5a65b5dbbcdc58f
treefd15347a4eab3e715b8f1bccc37a624e511ded58
parentc761115979a14f224851ada0fc549217c9cc0c5c
doc/rados: refine English in crush-map-edits.rst

This commit makes several refinements to the English in
rados/operations/crush-map-edits.rst, which refinements were suggested
by Cole Mitchell and Anthony D'Atri in the discussion of PR#48085.

Signed-off-by: Zac Dover <zac.dover@gmail.com>
(cherry picked from commit a70b720032876386d7fbebfb649849fa34e9da5f)
doc/rados/operations/crush-map-edits.rst