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authorZac Dover <zac.dover@gmail.com>
Tue, 29 Jun 2021 11:45:22 +0000 (21:45 +1000)
committerZac Dover <zac.dover@gmail.com>
Tue, 29 Jun 2021 11:45:22 +0000 (21:45 +1000)
commitd66a164ce721aafad26eebbd92029f0f816bcc85
tree3301b6d18db45f837c8d718f9734f3dd7eb135c4
parentf019a910980eaf9586ac39d7101c7e05cd09da4a
doc/cephadm: improving "Starting the Upgrade"

This PR (slightly) improves the text in the section "Starting
the Upgrade" in the "Upgrading Ceph" chapter of the cephadm
documentation.

This is a very minor update, and does little but bring the sentences
into agreement with many other sentences that I've already written.
This is done to give the reader an almost tabular sense of what to
expect when looking at our docs.

Signed-off-by: Zac Dover <zac.dover@gmail.com>
doc/cephadm/upgrade.rst