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authorZac Dover <zac.dover@gmail.com>
Wed, 14 Sep 2022 05:19:44 +0000 (15:19 +1000)
committerZac Dover <zac.dover@gmail.com>
Wed, 5 Oct 2022 05:51:32 +0000 (15:51 +1000)
commit35486ec11ee9c83ad205b3f864abbff8e0d3f163
treee535a984b339a35331495fa05ffd13ed25d5c280
parentf0c1b4447021de7a4b9266861a87f0db8c9d07f9
doc/rados: refine English in crush-map-edits.rst

This commit makes several refinements to the English in
rados/operations/crush-map-edits.rst, which refinements were suggested
by Cole Mitchell and Anthony D'Atri in the discussion of PR#48085.

Signed-off-by: Zac Dover <zac.dover@gmail.com>
(cherry picked from commit a70b720032876386d7fbebfb649849fa34e9da5f)
doc/rados/operations/crush-map-edits.rst