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authorZac Dover <zac.dover@gmail.com>
Sat, 21 Jan 2023 16:32:59 +0000 (02:32 +1000)
committerZac Dover <zac.dover@proton.me>
Wed, 8 Mar 2023 04:07:07 +0000 (14:07 +1000)
commit99e9e71ab8a00547199601105bf8bdd9f9f211e4
tree253d7a33bb25ab86f2c97f1eb41e72fc79c4ee07
parentebcfcd22bfc2cac13f18621d1b6a8a39efbd496b
doc/install: refine index.rst

Refine English sentences in doc/install/index.rst. Remove adverbial
phrases of time that refer to Nautilus-era features as "new", since that
was four years ago.

Signed-off-by: Zac Dover <zac.dover@gmail.com>
(cherry picked from commit e7669539aceffc0f6f5d61bd140f1c7936d21cf9)
doc/install/index.rst