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authorZac Dover <zac.dover@proton.me>
Wed, 23 Aug 2023 15:15:54 +0000 (01:15 +1000)
committerZac Dover <zac.dover@proton.me>
Mon, 28 Aug 2023 12:30:25 +0000 (22:30 +1000)
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parent8ec1d5285cbb3ab3c0ab619209cfb785d90607ff
doc/start: edit os-recommendations.rst

Improve the grammar in one sentence of the "Platforms" section of
doc/start/os-recommendations.rst. Improving that grammar involved
splitting the sentence into two sentences, but that's life. Update:
Anthony substantially rewrote this, so credit for this should rightly
go to him.

Co-authored-by: Anthony D'Atri <anthony.datri@gmail.com>
Signed-off-by: Zac Dover <zac.dover@proton.me>
(cherry picked from commit e19b9cea62c56cbd73049957d69d5aac16a97c08)
doc/start/os-recommendations.rst