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doc/architecture: repair RBD sentence 53878/head
authorZac Dover <zac.dover@proton.me>
Sat, 7 Oct 2023 21:43:43 +0000 (07:43 +1000)
committerZac Dover <zac.dover@proton.me>
Sun, 8 Oct 2023 00:49:16 +0000 (10:49 +1000)
commit03b8fe521b0da20122a9c6117880c7d633357d0a
treee3444cc78810abae61411b29868d20d60ca79cd9
parent804c25b5397aa4ef4666955f8f5d5c4c310504fc
doc/architecture: repair RBD sentence

Improve an ambiguous sentence in doc/architecture.rst.

The problem presented by the original sentence is that the phrasal verb
"to provide with" is implicated in one of its possible readings.
Interpreted in that way, the sentence seems to express the incorrect
idea that RBD furnishes block devices with snapshotting and cloning, as
though snapshotting and cloning are being delivered to the block
devices. In fact, snapshotting and cloning are just features of RBD, and
are features that are described on this page:
https://docs.ceph.com/en/quincy/rbd/rbd-snapshot/.

Signed-off-by: Zac Dover <zac.dover@proton.me>
(cherry picked from commit 5abd530460e3d5a60142d9350d93544402b6dec4)
doc/architecture.rst