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doc/mgr: edit telemetry.rst 63864/head
authorZac Dover <zac.dover@proton.me>
Tue, 10 Jun 2025 02:50:13 +0000 (12:50 +1000)
committerZac Dover <zac.dover@proton.me>
Wed, 11 Jun 2025 00:12:28 +0000 (10:12 +1000)
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doc/mgr: edit telemetry.rst

Edit doc/mgr/telemetry.rst.

Follow up on the suggestions made by Anthony D'Atri in
https://github.com/ceph/ceph/pull/63740.

Make several changes that were not earmarked in that PR, but that
nonetheless improve the quality of the English in telemetry.rst.

Signed-off-by: Zac Dover <zac.dover@proton.me>
(cherry picked from commit fc25b1ed12a98eace4c0665a529b69e86fcc9dc5)
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