doc/rados: update common.rst

Clarify some overwritten paragraphs in
doc/rados/configuration/common.rst. Cf.
https://github.com/ceph/ceph/pull/50795/files#r1153897231.

Reviewed-by: Anthony D'Atri <anthony.datri@gmail.com>
Signed-off-by: Zac Dover <zac.dover@proton.me>

diff --git a/doc/rados/configuration/common.rst b/doc/rados/configuration/common.rst
index 0b373f469b67bc706369cbdc251c339a62ab0fea..c397f4e52acce56e80b0065c7de24943ead40c82 100644 (file)
--- a/doc/rados/configuration/common.rst
+++ b/doc/rados/configuration/common.rst
@@ -123,11 +123,10 @@ OSD host, run the following commands:
     ssh {osd-host}
     sudo mkdir /var/lib/ceph/osd/ceph-{osd-number}
 
-The ``osd_data`` path ought to lead to a mount point that has mounted on it a
-device that is distinct from the device that contains the operating system and
-the daemons. To use a device distinct from the device that contains the
+The ``osd_data`` path must lead to a device that is not shared with the
+operating system. To use a device other than the device that contains the
 operating system and the daemons, prepare it for use with Ceph and mount it on
-the directory you just created by running the following commands:
+the directory you just created by running commands of the following form:
 
 .. prompt:: bash $