doc/cephfs: edit vstart warning text

Improve the English in the vstart warning in doc/cephfs/mantle.rst.

Co-authored-by: Anthony D'Atri <anthony.datri@gmail.com>
Signed-off-by: Zac Dover <zac.dover@proton.me>
(cherry picked from commit 9ce7f9bd6c006ede6e1d563f4273376e2dbc1d03)

diff --git a/doc/cephfs/mantle.rst b/doc/cephfs/mantle.rst
index 6212715afc0cc60fea8b16a09c60916f0e159037..39e0af3ba8eb1f66434b88b7022d3ac32338f233 100644 (file)
--- a/doc/cephfs/mantle.rst
+++ b/doc/cephfs/mantle.rst
@@ -35,10 +35,11 @@ Quickstart with vstart
 .. warning::
 
     Developing balancers with vstart is difficult because running all daemons
-    and clients on one node can overload the system. Let it run for a while, even
-    though you will likely see a bunch of lost heartbeat and laggy MDS warnings.
-    Most of the time this guide will work but sometimes all MDSs lock up and you
-    cannot actually see them spill. It is much better to run this on a cluster.
+    and clients on one node can overload the system. Let the system run for a
+    while, even though there will likely be many lost heartbeat warnings and
+    many laggy MDS warnings. In most cases this guide will work, but sometimes
+    when developing with vstart all MDSs will lock up and you cannot actually
+    see them spill. It is better to run this on a multi-node cluster.
 
 As a prerequisite, we assume you have installed `mdtest
 <https://sourceforge.net/projects/mdtest/>`_ or pulled the `Docker image