doc: Apply suggestions from code review

Co-authored-by: Neha Ojha <nehaojha88@gmail.com>
Co-authored-by: Josh Durgin <jdurgin@redhat.com>
Signed-off-by: David Zafman <dzafman@redhat.com>

diff --git a/PendingReleaseNotes b/PendingReleaseNotes
index b900e2b50006966d8745a1f8a324e1dc27cc4d73..0fc5579e8e5aeaa4e19485bd12abefc8090ed487 100644 (file)
--- a/PendingReleaseNotes
+++ b/PendingReleaseNotes
@@ -22,14 +22,14 @@
   ``osd_scrub_end_week_day`` are 0 - 6.  The use of 7 is now illegal.
   Specifying ``0`` for both values causes every day of the week to be allowed.
 
-* A new health check will warn if different versions of Ceph are running
-  on deamons. It will be a health error if multiple versions are detected.
-  This condition must exists for over 1 week by default in order for the
+* A new health check, DAEMON_OLD_VERSION, will warn if different versions of Ceph are running
+  on daemons. It will generate a health error if multiple versions are detected.
+  This condition must exist for over mon_warn_older_version_delay (set to 1 week by default) in order for the
   health condition to be triggered.  This allows most upgrades to proceed
-  without falsely see the warning.  If upgrade is paused for an extended
+  without falsely seeing the warning.  If upgrade is paused for an extended
   time period, health mute can be used like this
   "ceph health mute DAEMON_OLD_VERSION --sticky".  In this case after
-  upgrading has finish use "ceph health unmute DAEMON_OLD_VERSION".
+  upgrade has finished use "ceph health unmute DAEMON_OLD_VERSION".
 
 >=15.0.0
 --------

diff --git a/doc/rados/operations/health-checks.rst b/doc/rados/operations/health-checks.rst
index 65aeedd5df388349194847e78441f7ccd280d5c6..90fb9b5a1e21db01a9007bd12f2c28be44932946 100644 (file)
--- a/doc/rados/operations/health-checks.rst
+++ b/doc/rados/operations/health-checks.rst
@@ -28,14 +28,14 @@ Monitor
 DAEMON_OLD_VERSION
 __________________
 
-Warn if old version(s) of Ceph are running on any deamons.
-It will be a health error if multiple versions are detected.
-This condition must exists for over 1 week by default in order for the
+Warn if old version(s) of Ceph are running on any daemons.
+It will generate a health error if multiple versions are detected.
+This condition must exist for over mon_warn_older_version_delay (set to 1 week by default) in order for the
 health condition to be triggered.  This allows most upgrades to proceed
-without falsely see the warning.  If upgrade is paused for an extended
+without falsely seeing the warning.  If upgrade is paused for an extended
 time period, health mute can be used like this
 "ceph health mute DAEMON_OLD_VERSION --sticky".  In this case after
-upgrading has finish use "ceph health unmute DAEMON_OLD_VERSION".
+upgrade has finished use "ceph health unmute DAEMON_OLD_VERSION".
 
 MON_DOWN
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