doc/mgr: edit telemetry.rst

Follow up on the suggestion made by Anthony D'Atri in
https://github.com/ceph/ceph/pull/63826#discussion_r2136820769.

Signed-off-by: Zac Dover <zac.dover@proton.me>

diff --git a/doc/mgr/telemetry.rst b/doc/mgr/telemetry.rst
index ab64887b4cfc58bc24bc7e3d5b978dbe99c70f0d..5e849b536f53b5ece0531c12909274ba4ff40f78 100644 (file)
--- a/doc/mgr/telemetry.rst
+++ b/doc/mgr/telemetry.rst
@@ -312,8 +312,7 @@ command:
    ceph telemetry send
 
 If telemetry has not been enabled (by running the command ``ceph telemetry
-on``), you need to add ``--license sharing-1-0`` to the ``ceph telemetry send``
-command.
+on``), add ``--license sharing-1-0`` to the ``ceph telemetry send`` command.
 
 Sending telemetry through a proxy
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