doc/rados: improve "Ceph Subsystems"

Improve the English in the subsection "Ceph Subsystems" in the section
"Subsystem, Log and Debug Settings" [sic] in
doc/rados/troubleshooting/log-and-debug.rst.

Co-authored-by: Anthony D'Atri <anthony.datri@gmail.com>
Signed-off-by: Zac Dover <zac.dover@proton.me>
(cherry picked from commit 7bca5f57cc2c11bdd76dd0edb43c716a1d5ad355)

diff --git a/doc/rados/troubleshooting/log-and-debug.rst b/doc/rados/troubleshooting/log-and-debug.rst
index 929c3f53f8841b4dd29e68543237cf56ce151bcb..3117541aad3cc8d57d11f6a189a054a984768a5c 100644 (file)
--- a/doc/rados/troubleshooting/log-and-debug.rst
+++ b/doc/rados/troubleshooting/log-and-debug.rst
@@ -179,10 +179,12 @@ subsystem. Ceph's logging levels operate on a scale of ``1`` to ``20``, where
 logs are not sent to the output log unless one or more of the following
 conditions obtain:
 
-- a fatal signal is raised or
-- an ``assert`` in source code is triggered or
-- upon requested. Please consult `document on admin socket
-  <http://docs.ceph.com/en/latest/man/8/ceph/#daemon>`_ for more details.
+- a fatal signal has been raised or
+- an assertion within Ceph code has been triggered or
+- the sending of in-memory logs to the output log has been manually triggered.
+  Consult `the portion of the "Ceph Administration Tool documentation
+  that provides an example of how to submit admin socket commands
+  <http://docs.ceph.com/en/latest/man/8/ceph/#daemon>`_ for more detail.
 
 .. warning ::
    .. [#f1] In certain rare cases, there are logging levels that can take a value greater than 20. The resulting logs are extremely verbose.