doc/glossary: improve wording

Remove "e.g." and "etc." and improve the wording of a definition.

Signed-off-by: Zac Dover <zac.dover@gmail.com>

diff --git a/doc/glossary.rst b/doc/glossary.rst
index 8d8fbd66ae5ce1e48379ec6a27d12be443eaf387..9b644c67d33c4e73fdcdc6ce2ab238797c086790 100644 (file)
--- a/doc/glossary.rst
+++ b/doc/glossary.rst
@@ -61,12 +61,12 @@ reflect either technical terms or legacy ways of referring to Ceph systems.
                 more details.
 
        Ceph Interim Release
-                Versions of Ceph that have not yet been put through quality
-                assurance testing, but may contain new features.
+                A version of Ceph that has not yet been put through quality
+                assurance testing. May contain new features.
 
        Ceph Kernel Modules
-                The collection of kernel modules which can be used to interact
-                with the Ceph System (e.g., ``ceph.ko``, ``rbd.ko``).
+                The collection of kernel modules that can be used to interact
+                with the Ceph System (for example: ``ceph.ko``, ``rbd.ko``).
 
        Ceph Manager
        Ceph Manager Dashboard
@@ -132,7 +132,7 @@ reflect either technical terms or legacy ways of referring to Ceph systems.
        Cloud Platforms
        Cloud Stacks
                 Third party cloud provisioning platforms such as OpenStack,
-                CloudStack, OpenNebula, Proxmox VE, etc.
+                CloudStack, OpenNebula, and Proxmox VE.
 
        Cluster Map
                 The set of maps comprising the monitor map, OSD map, PG map,
@@ -179,7 +179,7 @@ reflect either technical terms or legacy ways of referring to Ceph systems.
        Node
        Object Storage Device
        OSD
-               A physical or logical storage unit (*e.g.*, LUN).
+               A physical or logical storage unit (for example: LUN).
                Sometimes, Ceph users use the
                term "OSD" to refer to :term:`Ceph OSD Daemon`, though the
                proper term is "Ceph OSD".