doc/mgr: edit telemetry.rst

Follow up on the suggestion made by Anthony D'Atri in
https://github.com/ceph/ceph/pull/63826#discussion_r2136820769.

Signed-off-by: Zac Dover <zac.dover@proton.me>
(cherry picked from commit a598c46c5055fc16b77d1d56adc1bd1b125f1410)

diff --git a/doc/mgr/telemetry.rst b/doc/mgr/telemetry.rst
index 87f38c55c9e50c138f1c2dbbddc3f192cfe1c970..241d5a9971cf419c1c45a299007c39601ba116ee 100644 (file)
--- a/doc/mgr/telemetry.rst
+++ b/doc/mgr/telemetry.rst
@@ -304,8 +304,7 @@ command:
    ceph telemetry send
 
 If telemetry has not been enabled (by running the command ``ceph telemetry
-on``), you need to add ``--license sharing-1-0`` to the ``ceph telemetry send``
-command.
+on``), add ``--license sharing-1-0`` to the ``ceph telemetry send`` command.
 
 Sending telemetry through a proxy
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