doc/rados: edit t-shooting-mon.rst

Improve the front matter of the section "Troubleshooting Monitors" in
doc/rados/troubleshooting/troubleshooting-mon.rst.

Co-authored-by: Anthony D'Atri <anthony.datri@gmail.com>
Signed-off-by: Zac Dover <zac.dover@proton.me>

diff --git a/doc/rados/troubleshooting/troubleshooting-mon.rst b/doc/rados/troubleshooting/troubleshooting-mon.rst
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@@ -6,14 +6,13 @@
 
 .. index:: monitor, high availability
 
-If a cluster encounters monitor-related problems, this does not necessarily
-mean that the cluster is in danger of going down. Even if multiple monitors are
-lost, the cluster can still be up and running, as long as there are enough
-surviving monitors to form a quorum.
-
-However serious your cluster's monitor-related problems might be, we recommend
-that you take the following troubleshooting steps.
-
+Even if a cluster experiences monitor-related problems, the cluster is not
+necessarily in danger of going down. If a cluster has lost multiple monitors,
+it can still remain up and running as long as there are enough surviving
+monitors to form a quorum.
+   
+If your cluster is having monitor-related problems, we recommend that you
+consult the following troubleshooting information.
 
 Initial Troubleshooting
 =======================