doc/releases/mimic: Updated dashboard description

Fixed typo and slightly reworked the description of the mgr
dashboard in the "Major changes" section. Updated the
description in the "Notable changes" section as well by adding
a note about creating an SSL certificate.

Signed-off-by: Lenz Grimmer <lgrimmer@suse.com>

diff --git a/doc/mgr/dashboard.rst b/doc/mgr/dashboard.rst
index 6c4856b538e936c159afc7b68b3a870f3669919f..e1dd01860d929f2c5db43908895f79321931409d 100644 (file)
--- a/doc/mgr/dashboard.rst
+++ b/doc/mgr/dashboard.rst
@@ -1,6 +1,8 @@
 Dashboard Plugin
 ================
 
+.. _mgr-dashboard-overview:
+
 Overview
 --------
 

diff --git a/doc/releases/mimic.rst b/doc/releases/mimic.rst
index 5623c77f9e3f7b1172dcda8fdac85b19f15e0770..69b4bc71962512e918402d310ba4c5e639f0bdad 100644 (file)
--- a/doc/releases/mimic.rst
+++ b/doc/releases/mimic.rst
@@ -9,10 +9,13 @@ bugs to the tracker.
 Major Changes from Luminous
 ---------------------------
 
-- *Dashbaord*:
+- *Dashboard*:
 
-  * The dashboard has been reimplemented by and/or ported from
-    openATTIC with significantly expanded functionality.
+  * The (read-only) Ceph manager dashboard introduced in Ceph Luminous has been
+    replaced with a new implementation inspired by and derived from the
+    `openATTIC <https://openattic.org>`_ Ceph management tool, providing a
+    drop-in replacement offering a :ref:`number of additional management
+    features <mgr-dashboard-overview>`.
 
 - *RADOS*:
 
@@ -367,9 +370,9 @@ Notable Changes
   - The (read-only) Ceph manager dashboard introduced in Ceph Luminous has been
     replaced with a new implementation, providing a drop-in replacement offering
     a number of additional management features. To access the new dashboard, you
-    first need to define a username and password. See the documentation for a
-    feature overview and installation instructions:
-    http://docs.ceph.com/docs/master/mgr/dashboard/
+    first need to define a username and password and create an SSL certificate.
+    See the :ref:`dashboard documentation <mgr-dashboard-overview>` for a feature
+    overview and installation instructions.
 
   - The ceph-rest-api command-line tool (obsoleted by the MGR "restful" module and
     deprecated since v12.2.5) has been dropped.