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authorZac Dover <zac.dover@gmail.com>
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                 CloudStack, OpenNebula, and Proxmox VE.
 
        Cluster Map
-                The set of maps comprising the monitor map, OSD map, PG map,
+                The set of maps consisting of the monitor map, OSD map, PG map,
                 MDS map, and CRUSH map, which together report the state of the
                 Ceph cluster. See :ref:`the "Cluster Map" section of the
                 Architecture document<architecture_cluster_map>` for details.